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brandon ledet
Number of posts : 50 Age : 32 Race : squad 5 member Registration date : 2007-12-16
| Subject: brandon ledet Sun Dec 16, 2007 12:16 pm | |
| Name:brandon Age:16 Gender:male Unit (1-13th):5 Zanpakutou-'Soul Slayer':kyoto [b]Brief Appearance:a handsome guy but the look of revenge in my eyesim medium sized darkish brown hair with hazel eyes that are aways blood shot.i always wear i leather ripped jacket andthe pants of a soul slayer that doesnt match.My soul slayer is always on my back and never leaves and with my shirt of you wil see a perment scar on my stomach.Also i always wear these golves that never can be torn and go up to my elbow.
Brief Personality:im nice but feels betrayed.I love food espically human food.i love juice and pork ramen.I love energy drinks.And i dont really care who i make mad except for admins.i love to go on dates and after a week or 2 i ask them to marry me.
History:I was born in a noble family and was great with spiritual power and always would train with my brother or father outside.My brother was captain of one of the gotei 13 and always acting strange while on assigments his liteunent(my cousin) would say.Well one day when i was coming home from playing i walked into the house to see my brother with a hollow mask on and blood shed every where and he slashed my stomach and left a perment scar on my stomach.So i was left alone and i decided to join the soul academy that is where my story begins
rp samle:i have left the soul society a couple of years back on search for my brother and i have been attacked none stop by hungry holows.But today the hollow took on a human form and a cracked mask and had a zanpakutou and swong at me and as i go to block i think "what is this".The hollow says"arrancnar' and slashes at me and cuts my shoulder and i stick my soul slayer thourgh his stomach.
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Arashi Urahara Vizard Leader
Number of posts : 118 Age : 30 Location : Tied to your bed Married To : none T.T Race : Vizard Registration date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: brandon ledet Mon Dec 17, 2007 5:02 am | |
| You don't have bankai! You can't use shikai until you have 50 posts! Put more into the Appearance, the history and the rp sample should be litterate. | |
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brandon ledet
Number of posts : 50 Age : 32 Race : squad 5 member Registration date : 2007-12-16
| Subject: Re: brandon ledet Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:16 am | |
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Arashi Urahara Vizard Leader
Number of posts : 118 Age : 30 Location : Tied to your bed Married To : none T.T Race : Vizard Registration date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: brandon ledet Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:18 am | |
| I told you , write more about your appearance, make a better history and the rp sample should be litterate.
if you don't know how to put it then read the RP Sample. | |
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brandon ledet
Number of posts : 50 Age : 32 Race : squad 5 member Registration date : 2007-12-16
| Subject: Re: brandon ledet Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:19 am | |
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brandon ledet
Number of posts : 50 Age : 32 Race : squad 5 member Registration date : 2007-12-16
| Subject: Re: brandon ledet Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:33 am | |
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Arashi Urahara Vizard Leader
Number of posts : 118 Age : 30 Location : Tied to your bed Married To : none T.T Race : Vizard Registration date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: brandon ledet Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:36 am | |
| that's okay...
accepted, btw please try resizing your avatar..it's stretching the autor chart. | |
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brandon ledet
Number of posts : 50 Age : 32 Race : squad 5 member Registration date : 2007-12-16
| Subject: Re: brandon ledet Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:38 am | |
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Suzume_memories
Number of posts : 9 Age : 34 Location : darkness Race : 2nd squad Registration date : 2009-05-06
| Subject: Re: brandon ledet Wed May 06, 2009 9:09 pm | |
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